Monday, March 28, 2016

Poetry Break: Another Disturbing One-Liner

Black Horse Wish
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Here it is:

Another Horse
If wishes were horses, we'd wish they weren't.

With the possible exception of Mr. Ed.


UPDATE: Is the following better?

Another Horse
If wishes were horses, we'd wish they were not.

This sounds better to my ear, but it has eleven syllables, not ten, and I'm aiming for iambic pentameter.

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